Monday, August 8, 2011

What can I say? You asked me for my story, dear--a re post of an earlier poem?

This is fantastic. I love the way you describe the lunacy (or is it the reality) of this narrator's experiences. I can't tell if this is a drug induced recollection or the real thing. Frankly, that doesn't matter because it could be a mixture of both or neither and this poem would still be one heck of a read. Wow! The only thing I noticed is that the narrator's story was never explicitly asked for in the poem. Was that intentional? Maybe this whole story is part of a strange acid trip, or even a dream. I love your writing!

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