Please read my chapter?

I REALLY REALLY like it!!! :) I dont know where this is in your book but I think you should talk about the father more. When it ended I wanted to know more about what he has done...maybe in a chapter previous to this you could tell about what the dad did to Hillary but maybe you already have one! haha But I defiantly would read more of this. If you need a reader for when you finish your book i will read it FOR SURE!!! :)